Irelyn's sick sentences

Sick sick sentences: 

These sentences are ‘sick’ and need help to get better. 

Can you help?

A lion sat on the van. 

The lion sat on the van and roared  proudly as the van  soared away.

A giraffe put his head out through the window. 

A giraffe stuck his gigantic Nek out through the window while he was driving. 

The zebra walked across the road.

The zebra walked across the zebra crossing crying because he thought a zebra had been squished on the zebra crossing  .