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Kia ora Im Olivia from Yaldhurt Model school I liked the way you put lots of information. Did you think about starting it in a more exciting way. I wont to know more so next time you write an exciting bog pleas tell the readres more.
Hi, Thank you Olivia for your comment. Thank you for the good suggestions of having an exciting start to my writing and telling the readers more. I will try that. Can you comment with the link to your class blog? Thanks Irelyn
Kia ora Im Olivia from Yaldhurt Model school
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you put lots of information.
Did you think about starting it in a more exciting way.
I wont to know more so next time you write an exciting bog pleas tell the readres more.
Hi,
ReplyDeleteThank you Olivia for your comment. Thank you for the good suggestions of having an exciting start to my writing and telling the readers more. I will try that. Can you comment with the link to your class blog?
Thanks Irelyn
that looks great Irelyn i like your expression.
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DeleteI like how you did cool words.I thought it was really good.you should add some more to it.by thomas
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